Pierro56
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Bonjour,
Si quelqu'un de bon en anglais pouvais m'aider ça serait super sympa ! surtout pour les fautes....
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Introduction :
The life is different at the *****.
Indeed, it takes time to adapt to ******.
Since two months, I live alone in a studio.
Before, I lived with my family and I returned in my house every days.
So, firstly, the student's life is different
In fact, we are more autonomous that the High School. We must to manage our personal work to have a success of our studies. The schedule is different every week, therefore I must to adapt.
For instance, the lessons last 1:30 o'clock.
At first, it's long and we take quickly the habit.
Moreover, the school day is longer to compare at the high school.
My expectations are high
I wanted the free in my work and here it's possible with the teachers. Indeed, they look this with a regard professional and it's better for the students. They are not every time to do the police and to watch constantly.
Furthermore, the lessons are really interessant, they are developed and will have to serve us in the future life
To live alone, it's a new life
In fact, to live alone, it's new for me.
I dispose a studio, it's good, it is very practice because the school is at the 2 minutes.
The morning and the evening, I must to do to eat.
Many ideas are needed to cook, if we do not want to eat always the same things
There are also the management of daily life, the pocket money
Conclusion
The life is different at the ****.
Indeed, it takes time to adapt to university life.
The student's life is different and this to allow to say that my expectations are high.
To finish, I like to live alone and I like the student's life.
Merci d'avance
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Pierro56
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nina50
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| Pierro56 a écrit: | Bonjour,
Si quelqu'un de bon en anglais pouvais m'aider ça serait super sympa ! surtout pour les fautes....
Les *** sont fait exprès
Introduction :
The life is different at the *****.
Indeed, it takes time to adapt to ******.
I have been living alone in a studio for two months.
Before, I lived with my family and I returned at home every days.
So, firstly, the student's life is different
In fact, we are more autonomous than at the High School. We must manage our personal work to success in our studies. The schedule is different every week, therefore I must adapt myself.
[Je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire] For instance, the lessons last 1:30 o'clock.
[là non plus] At first, it's long and we take quickly the habit.
Moreover, the school day is longer than at the high school.
My expectations are high
I wanted some liberties in my work and here it's possible with the teachers. Indeed, they look this with a professional regard and it's better for the students. They do not always have to do the police and to watch constantly.
Furthermore, the lessons are really interesting, they are developed and will have to serve us in the future life.
Living alone: it's a new life
In fact, living alone is new for me.
I dispose a studio, it's good, it is very convenient because the school is at the 2 minutes.
The morning and the evening, I must cook.
Many ideas are needed to cook, if we do not want to eat always the same things
There are also the management of daily life, the pocket money
Conclusion
The life is different at the ****.
Indeed, it takes time to adapt to university life.
The student's life is different and [comprend pas après ] this to allow to say that my expectations are high.
To finish, I like living alone and I like the student's life.
Merci d'avance |
Je corrige direct dans la citation :p |
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xROOSIE
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| nina50 a écrit: | | Pierro56 a écrit: | Bonjour,
Si quelqu'un de bon en anglais pouvais m'aider ça serait super sympa ! surtout pour les fautes....
Les *** sont fait exprès
Introduction :
The life is different at the *****.
Indeed, it takes time to adapt to ******.
I have been living alone in a studio for two months.
Avant, je vivais avec ma famille et je retournais à la maison tous les jours.
Tout d'abord, la vie d'étudiant est différent
En fait, Nous sommes plus autonomes qu'au Lycée - High School - . Nous devons gérer notre travail personnel pour réussir nos études.L'emploi du temps est différent toutes les semaine, donc je dois m'adapter.
[Je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire] For instance, the lessons last 1:30 o'clock.
[là non plus] At first, it's long and we take quickly the habit.
Au début c'est long, mais nous prenons vite l'habitude [la phrase anglaise est bizarre]
De plus la journée d'école est plus longue qu'au lycée
My expectations are high
I wanted some liberties in my work and here it's possible with the teachers. Indeed, they look this with a professional regard and it's better for the students. They do not always have to do the police and to watch constantly.
Furthermore, the lessons are really interesting, they are developed and will have to serve us in the future life.
Living alone: it's a new life
In fact, living alone is new for me.
I dispose a studio, it's good, it is very convenient because the school is at the 2 minutes.
The morning and the evening, I must cook.
Many ideas are needed to cook, if we do not want to eat always the same things
There are also the management of daily life, the pocket money
Conclusion
The life is different at the ****.
Indeed, it takes time to adapt to university life.
The student's life is different and [comprend pas après ] this to allow to say that my expectations are high.
To finish, I like living alone and I like the student's life.
Merci d'avance |
Je corrige direct dans la citation :p |
Il y a des phrases anglaises qui veulent un peu rien dire, je comprends pas trop...
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